Post by Admin on Jul 1, 2013 20:07:08 GMT
PLEASE NOTE THE FOLLOWING:
- It is very unlikely for a kit to "wander" off out of camp more than once or twice. They'd have to be pretty darn sneaky because they are confined to camp and so they'll have to get past warriors, the high ranks, and their parents.
- Once again in order to get into the forest she'd have to sneak out, not just walk out. In order to include Mothkit, Brackenpaw, and Yellowtail like that you need to PM their owners and get a confirmation (then let the staff know).
- There have been no battles in 15 moons, so it is impossible for this to have happened.
- A minor case of illness is alright to include in your history, but a major epidemic or outbreak that would case warriors to say random things can only be included if it is already part of the written history. Also, Yellowtail would not, by any means, let Acornkit treat herself. Kits would not know what herbs to take either. They are just little, little babies still, not fully functioning apprentices. Also, as is stated in the rules, no one is allowed to know healing unless it has been played out with the medicine cat. Herbs to heal a cold are more advanced then the basics and thus are breaking the rules to know without permission.
- A warrior would not tell a kit to fetch herbs. Instead they would send an apprentice to fetch the medicine cat. Once again you are godmodding another person's character. Littlestar's bio says nothing about knowing herbs, and either way you must ask for permission from Sparkie to use her character.
- She cannot still try to heal others because she has not been taught herbs, and no one is allowed to interfere with the medicine cat's job because it is highly annoying and against the rules.
It is also against the rules to make a character meant to be a medicine cat apprentice. Unless you and Yellowtail already plotted this out, you cannot make them specifically for that role.
IN CLOSING;
1) No one can heal but the medicine cat unless trained in character.
2) Do not make a kit destined to be a medicine cat apprentice unless you and the medicine cat have already planned it out.
3) Do not god mod other's characters.
4) Do not add events that do not go with the plot.
We have corrected, or attempted to correct things like this in other posts you have made, but no further action seems to have been taken on your part to fix these. I hate to have to be the party-pooper (I know I probably sound heartless and robotic when I post these things, but I really do hate having to make these posts), but if you continue to break our rules I will give you a warning. Receiving three of these results in a temporary ban. Please stop pushing to be medicine cat; if it happens it happens, and if it doesn't it doesn't. It is a tad obnoxious and is not in your control in any way, and if I might add; hinting at wanting to be medicine cat apprentice does not make medicine cats want to chose your character.
If you think you need help revising or creating a character and feel that something might be off, talk to the other members or message the staff and ask for advice. That might help in the future.
I'm sorry for the lengthy post.
Thank you for your time.
-ADMIN
"Acornkit would always wander off into her own little world. She would imagine things and walk into the forest to help her imagination. The other Warriors would always have to find her from her 'adventure', but no matter how many times they scolded her, she would continue to wander."
- It is very unlikely for a kit to "wander" off out of camp more than once or twice. They'd have to be pretty darn sneaky because they are confined to camp and so they'll have to get past warriors, the high ranks, and their parents.
"Wanting to show Mothkit that she could be a medicine cat, she walked into the forest and started collecting herbs. Most of the 'herbs' were random leaves, but one of the berries she had picked was nightshade. Acornkit brought the herbs to camp, and she and Mothkit looked over them. Mothkit, not convinced, didn't eat any of them, not being stupid, but Acornkit gulped a few of the berries down. She got super sick, and almost died. Luckily, Brackenpaw, who was dully watching, got the medicine cat. Yellowtail was of course upset and angry, but after fully recovering, Acornkit was still happy-go lucky."
- Once again in order to get into the forest she'd have to sneak out, not just walk out. In order to include Mothkit, Brackenpaw, and Yellowtail like that you need to PM their owners and get a confirmation (then let the staff know).
"After a few battles passed, Acornkit still wanted to be medicine cat, not knowing how hard it was to do. Leaf Bare came, along with more battles. Acornkit was use to seeing bad injuries now, and didn't mind the bloodshed, as long as no one died and it wasn't for naught."
- There have been no battles in 15 moons, so it is impossible for this to have happened.
"Then, sickness spread throughout the camp. The kits were getting sick all over, but Acornkit stayed healthy. She had often watched Yellowtail and knew which herbs to eat now that would keep her fine. Yellowtail always confirmed though, just in case she picked a duplicate.
Some of the cats scared her though. The sickness made some Warriors talk about random things, and others were feverish. It seemed severe to Acornkit, when in reality, it was only a small strain. It eventually left, but Acornkit now feared sickness."
Some of the cats scared her though. The sickness made some Warriors talk about random things, and others were feverish. It seemed severe to Acornkit, when in reality, it was only a small strain. It eventually left, but Acornkit now feared sickness."
- A minor case of illness is alright to include in your history, but a major epidemic or outbreak that would case warriors to say random things can only be included if it is already part of the written history. Also, Yellowtail would not, by any means, let Acornkit treat herself. Kits would not know what herbs to take either. They are just little, little babies still, not fully functioning apprentices. Also, as is stated in the rules, no one is allowed to know healing unless it has been played out with the medicine cat. Herbs to heal a cold are more advanced then the basics and thus are breaking the rules to know without permission.
" The Warrior told Acornkit to fetch herbs that Yellowtail had used, and to not rush and think straight, while he soothed the elder. Acornkit, shaking, stumbled over to the medicine cat den. Littlestar was in there, and Acornkit asked for help. After grabbing the right herbs, Littlestar headed over to the elders den, but the elder was still weak from the recen sickness, and too old to deal with another."
- A warrior would not tell a kit to fetch herbs. Instead they would send an apprentice to fetch the medicine cat. Once again you are godmodding another person's character. Littlestar's bio says nothing about knowing herbs, and either way you must ask for permission from Sparkie to use her character.
"Even though she might not even be picked, she still tries to heal others. She knows that if she doesn't become medicine cat apprentice, she'll still know to heal others, even if it's just basic. "
- She cannot still try to heal others because she has not been taught herbs, and no one is allowed to interfere with the medicine cat's job because it is highly annoying and against the rules.
It is also against the rules to make a character meant to be a medicine cat apprentice. Unless you and Yellowtail already plotted this out, you cannot make them specifically for that role.
IN CLOSING;
1) No one can heal but the medicine cat unless trained in character.
2) Do not make a kit destined to be a medicine cat apprentice unless you and the medicine cat have already planned it out.
3) Do not god mod other's characters.
4) Do not add events that do not go with the plot.
We have corrected, or attempted to correct things like this in other posts you have made, but no further action seems to have been taken on your part to fix these. I hate to have to be the party-pooper (I know I probably sound heartless and robotic when I post these things, but I really do hate having to make these posts), but if you continue to break our rules I will give you a warning. Receiving three of these results in a temporary ban. Please stop pushing to be medicine cat; if it happens it happens, and if it doesn't it doesn't. It is a tad obnoxious and is not in your control in any way, and if I might add; hinting at wanting to be medicine cat apprentice does not make medicine cats want to chose your character.
If you think you need help revising or creating a character and feel that something might be off, talk to the other members or message the staff and ask for advice. That might help in the future.
I'm sorry for the lengthy post.
Thank you for your time.
-ADMIN
