Brackenpaw
ThunderClan
Apprentice
Posts: 15
User: Sparkie
Mentor: Foxfang
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Post by Brackenpaw on Jun 26, 2013 0:01:28 GMT
Brackenpaw was up early, tearing out of the apprentice den and charging across camp, on his was to see Palewhisker. The warrior had promised to give him advice today, but when Brackenpaw got to the warrior's den, his father wasn't there. Brackenpaw shrugged, wondering back towards his new den. Palewhisker was very important and he'd told Brackenpaw last night that there was a possibility that he would be on dawn patrol. Brackenpaw knew his father loved him.
He curled up in the ferns surrounding the den, letting himself settle into the shade. His ceremony last night had been one of the best, in his personal opinion. Mosspaw had gone first, accepting her mentor and practically falling over herself to touch noses with the cat. Frostpaw was a little more sedated, but that didn't stop her from muffling a purr when she touched noses with her new mentor. Brackenpaw couldn't help but feel proud of his sisters, how big they'd gotten and how strong and brilliant they were going to be as warriors.
And himself, well, he knew he was going to be the best warrior ever. Palewhisker had assured him that if his mentor, Foxfang, ever neglected him, that he would take Brackenpaw out himself, but Brackenpaw was nearly positive that Foxfang would be a good mentor. As a kit, he'd never really paid much attention to the ginger warrior, Palewhisker's disdain for the warrior enough of a recommendation to ignore him, but still, his eyes had been shining just as excitedly as Brackenpaw had felt when they'd touched noses. Brackenpaw yawned, finally feeling the early morning catch up to him, and stretched out on his side, sticking his face out of the ferns to observe the camp.
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Foxfang
ThunderClan
Warrior
Posts: 30
User: Grey
Apprentice: Brackenpaw
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Post by Foxfang on Jun 27, 2013 1:45:49 GMT
Brooding green eyes glared from the shadows of an overhanging fern as their owner’s dark ginger form hunched beneath. One paw was lifted and its pad still burned from where the thorn had been pulled. Foxfang had woken early that morning to find the little annoyance, and internally he was still berating himself for making the dumb mistake. He must have carried it into his nest after returning from talking to the kittypet. Yes, that was it. He had somewhat broken the rules and fate was punishing him.
The warrior let out a low, drawn out sigh. Tenderly he placed his foot once more upon the ground and gave weight to the motion. It held, of course. So, without further hesitation, he parted his maw to let the apprentice, who had curled up not even a foxlength away, know of his whereabouts. “Brackenpaw.” Foxfang’s mew was cold, but unintentionally so. He was thrilled to have been given a second apprentice, and the prospect of watching another young cat grow into themselves was agreeable indeed.
Rising upon all fours the tall tom loomed above the young apprentice as he strode closer. Brackenpaw would make a good warrior, of this he was certain. The smaller tom already had wide, weight bearing shoulders that would lend him great strength. What mattered now what the other’s ability to follow orders, interact with his clanmates, and grow into himself. Not to mention, the yet little cat had good breeding. His father Palewhisker was certainly a sign of that.
I wonder, how have my own kits fared? Troublesome thoughts intersected the warrior as he paused in his contemplation of Brackenpaw. His ShadowClan kits were still a secret to ThunderClan, but the worst part is that they were still somewhat a secret to him. Do they have my strength and their mother’s kindness? Are they loved by ShadowClan? Are they alive? He had no answers to his questions, and a growing impatience was the result. The warrior shook his head.
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Brackenpaw
ThunderClan
Apprentice
Posts: 15
User: Sparkie
Mentor: Foxfang
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Post by Brackenpaw on Jun 27, 2013 4:51:06 GMT
The minute Brackenpaw heard his name, he perked his ears, his eyes darting to his mentor. He was again impressed how big the ginger warrior was. His shoulders alone could block out the sun and Brackenpaw had to admire the strength he knew was in them. Foxfang's voice was cold and Brackenpaw had to wonder if he'd already done something wrong.
He quickly rolled on his back, sending the fern leaves into a flurry of activity, but rolled back to his paws immediately. He knew he was going to be as large as his mentor. Palewhisker was and Brackenpaw was already big for his age. He just had to wait it out. Patience was easy. He could to it.
He trotted towards Foxfang, tail up and proud, and scented Yellowtail on him, wondering when the warrior had needed to see the medicine cat. That might have been the reason he hadn't scented him in the warriors den when he was on his quest for his father. Maybe Foxfang had been purposely avoiding Brackenpaw. Maybe Foxfang didn't want another apprentice. Spottednose was a great warrior and it had all been to Foxfang. Maybe he didn't want to waste his time with another one.
"Yes?" He asked, planting himself in front of Foxfang, determined to be a better apprentice than Spottednose. He would learn everything.
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Foxfang
ThunderClan
Warrior
Posts: 30
User: Grey
Apprentice: Brackenpaw
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Post by Foxfang on Jun 28, 2013 18:57:49 GMT
Deep olive eyes widened as the younger tom rolled within the ferns, causing them to flutter and flicker as if in dissatisfaction. It had been many moons since Foxfang had last had a younger cat to train, and although he frequently visited his youthful daughters the warrior still found surprised in the movements of apprentices. They were more prone to random acts, to barging off without a thought, and to enjoying the little pleasures of life. That was it, they were full of life. A grin grew on the older cat’s maw.
After admiring the freedom of youth, Foxfang was somewhat taken aback when Brackenpaw responded in a serious tone. The astonishment quickly grew to appreciation. Brackenpaw would make a fine warrior indeed.
“Save your energy, we have a long journey ahead.” Without clarifying his meaning the ginger feline pushed his way out of the shadowing ferns. Warmth, hot and almost unbearable in the contrast, hit the tom with force. The days were growing hotter, and for a moment the warrior wondered if the forest was in danger of fire. Foxfang did not look back, though, or falter in his momentum until his paws had carried him across the clearing. Once he had reached the narrow camp entrance the warrior stopped to cast a wary glance behind.
In a deep meow, colored by personal excitement for the golden cat’s reaction, Foxfang announced their destination. “Are you ready to see the whole of ThunderClan’s territory?”
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Brackenpaw
ThunderClan
Apprentice
Posts: 15
User: Sparkie
Mentor: Foxfang
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Post by Brackenpaw on Jun 28, 2013 19:51:27 GMT
“Save your energy, we have a long journey ahead.”
And Brackenpaw winced, feeling ashamed that he'd been so eager. A real warrior didn't behave so silly. He was already failing to be better than Spottednose. Of course Foxfang was going to tell him to calm down. He must be oozing excitement. And unlike Mosspaw, he knew he didn't have the stamina to goof off and tour the entire territory.
He took a deep breath, soothing his nerves and trotted behind Foxfang towards the gorse tunnel. He couldn't help bouncing a little on his toes because honestly, this was the first time, the very first time he would actually see how the forest worked. Okay, well, there was that one time when he was younger that Mosspaw and Frostpaw got lost but that wasn't important because this time he was going to leave camp with permission.
Foxfang paused at the edge of camp, looking behind him to settle his eyes on Brackenpaw. Brackenpaw immediately straightened, meeting his mentors eyes. He tried to quell the thrill buzzing through his body. "Are you ready to see the whole of ThunderClan’s territory?” Foxfang asked.
Brackenpaw's breath stuttered along with his heart. He felt a shiver travel down his spine and he felt his neck fur ruffled with joy. Before he could contain himself, he bounded out of the tunnel, feeling the air brush on his face and the new scents sweep past him and new sounds filled his ears. It was a whirlwind of new information; he lifted his nose scenting but he couldn't pay attention because his ears were flicking around catching noises that he also couldn't pay attention to and then he froze, remembering Foxfang. He turned around guiltily, watching the tunnel.
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